my chrecter

Name:jeremy is that fine lol
Character:
Gender:male
Class:sonic heros
Formation:speed
Species:hegog
Where did you hear about us:heaven forum
Role Play Example:i hit u u take 12 damage

u need a new name... im already shadow

there

Here are your mistakes:

Name:jeremy is that fine lol [You need a name, not a sentence, like Jeremy.]
Character: [You need to make a good sprite of your hedgehog, or get someone to make one for you.]
Gender:male [This is fine.]
Class:sonic heros [Great, good.]
Formation:speed [This is also okay.]
Species:hegog [This is good too.]
Where did you hear about us:heaven forum [Fine, good enough.]
Role Play Example:i hit u u take 12 damage [Maybe you should think about more detail, and make a few paragraphs instead of a sentence. Remember you can't choose weather the opponent takes damage or not.]

Another note, please make sure you don't make mistakes in your spellings...

Uh im wanting to join but i dont know about making a sprite im bad at making them